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Monday, 18 November 2019

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10 comments:

  1. Anonymous18 November 2019 at 12:40

    Hey Jerricho!
    Great work! It is really funny
    I liked how you added things in reality like Sylvia park and fortnite!
    A bit of feedback: Try and re read your writing and then everything would be great! Like Shour (sure)

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  2. Anonymous18 November 2019 at 12:42

    Hey Jerricho great Superchat. But I think you need to fix some parts up and reread it again. But overall great job and keep it up.

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  3. Anonymous18 November 2019 at 12:43

    hey jerricho what amazing job you have done i liked how you done heaps of information keep it up

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  4. Anonymous18 November 2019 at 12:45

    Hi Jerry! Nice work on your Superchat! It was very entertaining!

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  5. Wint18 November 2019 at 12:45

    Hey Jerricho,
    your work was really hilarious! Even though, it was a bit confusing you still did an amazing job!

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  6. Anonymous18 November 2019 at 12:47

    Great job Jericho

    You just need to work on your spelling and re reading but over all it was great 👍 keep it up

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  7. Anonymous18 November 2019 at 12:47

    Hi jerry I really like your super hero chat because it is cool and wonderful.

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  8. Anonymous18 November 2019 at 12:47

    Hi that is a cool story

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  9. Anonymous18 November 2019 at 12:48

    Hi Jerry ...
    Your writing is so interesting and cool

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  10. Anonymous18 November 2019 at 12:48

    hi jericho i like the way you wrote the super hero writing

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